- Make the animals the stars, rather than the people in the story: I like to give my animal characters fun personalities that children will relate to. For example, in the story Charlene the Star and Hattie's Heroes, Hattie the chicken likes to wear hats. She's also an emotional little chicken. How does the reader know when she's happy or excited? Hattie hops around, flapping her wings.
- Share the thoughts of the animals: I like to share the thoughts of the animals so that the readers learn more about their personalities and their natural talents. It's fun to give them skills, the same as people have. One example is that Hattie finds she's very good at organizing events. But, since chickens don't have hands, she writes signs and ads with her beak and she remarks that she has very nice "beakmanship" and it's not at all like chicken scratch.
- Be sure the animal characters learn important things: In my stories, I take care to ensure that the animal characters grow and learn, the same as human characters do. In my story, Charlie the Horse, Charlie dreams of becoming a famous racehorse like his dad, Charles the Great. But he has trouble focusing on his work and finds himself distracted by things like daffodils and tulips that he would like to munch on during his workouts. Eventually, he learns he won't be the first one to reach the finish line if he continues being distracted.
Deanie Humphrys-Dunne is a children's author. We'll talk about my books, recent events and writing hints.
Sunday, November 17, 2013
Writing stories about animals? Some thoughts..
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This is great advice Deanie. Even I can use this information for future characters. Thank you.ReplyDelete
Thanks for the compliment, Murees. I'm so happy to hear from you. I missed you. Also glad that my advice will help you. D Have a great day.ReplyDelete
Deanie, I enjoyed this immensely. I'm a dog lover and I often write about them. I love that "very nice 'beakmanship.'" Too cute! If I had kids I would definitely read your stories to them.ReplyDelete
I love to write about animals and some day would love to try writing a story with the animals as the main characters. This is great advice to remember!ReplyDelete
Oh, it would be fun to read your animal story, Julie. You may already know that our family dog, Elliott, is one of the main characters in Charlene the Star and Charlene the Star and Hattie's Heroes. We think he likes the extra attention. DDelete
Thanks for the pointers Deanie.ReplyDelete
I know that I do want to write a story about animals one day... (well I (sort of) have a draft of one already...)
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So happy you enjoyed the little hints, Michelle. I think children really enjoy reading about animals. Remember to tell me when you finish your story. That's exciting for you. My sister and I will have a new animal story published early next year.ReplyDelete
"Beakmanship" Love this, Deanie. :DReplyDelete
Thank you, Candilynn. You'd love Hattie. She's a cute red chicken who likes to wear hats! She finds out that she has more talents than looking beautiful in her hats.D Have a great weekend and thanks for stopping by.ReplyDelete
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